In this scene, Claire and her friend Gemma have been kidnapped and separated from their friends, who they've just learned will be thrown into a fighting pit against starved, bloodthirsty Hellions. The ringleader of this event has also told them they'll be used in terrible ways for the pirates holding them captive. Gemma, a fiery woman who isn't afraid to speak her mind, gives her opinion on the matter.
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“This
is not going to happen,” Gemma snarled. I turned and looked at her, seeing the
rage on her face as she gripped the bars tightly. “I am not going to watch them
die. I am not going to be treated like a plaything.”
I
looked at her. “Can you get out of the cage?” I asked.
“Yes,” she replied, so quiet I
barely heard her. “They didn’t search me well enough.”---
Writing this novel has been going really well lately, and I'm excited to keep it going. I have a three day weekend coming up, so I'm hoping to *possibly* complete the rough draft by Wednesday. I'm at least halfway I think, so if I manage to hit my target 10K in the next three days (lofty, but I'm not planning to do much else, and not complaining about that, either), I might get it done or close to.
In other news, I've been featured in some interviews and blog posts! Mocha Memoirs Press asked me to give my thoughts about writing horror for
It's been a fairly good week, and I'm hoping that next week will be even better. Don't forget to check out the snippets from other WeWriWa authors and leave them some love!
Amy
Nice setup and great tension. Good luck, Gemma!
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DeleteI'm glad she has a plan, or at least a chance of escaping. Great tension.
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DeleteKaryn is correct, you've done a great job building tension in this snippet. I always enjoy resourceful characters and clumsy jailers. Well done!
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DeleteOoh, I love snarling Gemma! Very tense and dynamic snippet.
ReplyDeleteHaha thank you. She is a lot of fun to write.
DeleteDramatic and somehow I have total faith in Gemma to not only escape but to also save their friends! Terrific excerpt...
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DeleteFierce girl, there. I just hope she doesn't get them out of the cage and into a worse mess! (FYI, you have Claire looking at Gemma in the first paragraph, and then looking at her again in the second one.)
ReplyDeleteThey'll probably get out of trouble before getting into it again. ;) Also, thank you for pointing out the error!
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