tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post2322050574781076499..comments2023-12-02T02:39:28.391-08:00Comments on Literary Braun: Sunday SnippetAmy Braunhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-6443323240308937702015-02-16T06:47:12.292-08:002015-02-16T06:47:12.292-08:00They'll probably get out of trouble before get...They'll probably get out of trouble before getting into it again. ;) Also, thank you for pointing out the error!Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-41635585947366544402015-02-15T22:22:37.962-08:002015-02-15T22:22:37.962-08:00Fierce girl, there. I just hope she doesn't ge...Fierce girl, there. I just hope she doesn't get them out of the cage and into a worse mess! (FYI, you have Claire looking at Gemma in the first paragraph, and then looking at her again in the second one.)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17342129595430487116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-57842204955131370082015-02-15T20:54:50.109-08:002015-02-15T20:54:50.109-08:00Thank you so much!Thank you so much!Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-22933904161116869222015-02-15T20:54:40.649-08:002015-02-15T20:54:40.649-08:00Haha thank you. She is a lot of fun to write. Haha thank you. She is a lot of fun to write. Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-22539559946945159562015-02-15T20:54:19.282-08:002015-02-15T20:54:19.282-08:00Thank you so much!Thank you so much!Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-62203222279653355712015-02-15T20:54:03.776-08:002015-02-15T20:54:03.776-08:00Thanks!Thanks!Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-52510213061494460302015-02-15T20:53:43.953-08:002015-02-15T20:53:43.953-08:00Thank you!Thank you!Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-57538841358860306432015-02-15T13:06:59.638-08:002015-02-15T13:06:59.638-08:00Dramatic and somehow I have total faith in Gemma t...Dramatic and somehow I have total faith in Gemma to not only escape but to also save their friends! Terrific excerpt...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-22854649260099011712015-02-15T10:23:02.847-08:002015-02-15T10:23:02.847-08:00Ooh, I love snarling Gemma! Very tense and dynamic...Ooh, I love snarling Gemma! Very tense and dynamic snippet. Christina Ochshttp://christinaochs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-36549635343003377912015-02-15T10:21:17.948-08:002015-02-15T10:21:17.948-08:00Karyn is correct, you've done a great job buil...Karyn is correct, you've done a great job building tension in this snippet. I always enjoy resourceful characters and clumsy jailers. Well done!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-39931242241167110862015-02-15T09:39:37.346-08:002015-02-15T09:39:37.346-08:00I'm glad she has a plan, or at least a chance ...I'm glad she has a plan, or at least a chance of escaping. Great tension. Karyn Goodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07137027268568162257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-67080487276610442015-02-15T08:17:46.659-08:002015-02-15T08:17:46.659-08:00Nice setup and great tension. Good luck, Gemma!Nice setup and great tension. Good luck, Gemma!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.com