My heart raced as the mushroom-covered bark peeled off the
wide stem of the tree. It took the shape of a stick man, a narrow, craggy body
with long, gangly limbs. The moss and fractured bark could hardly be seen under
the thick mushrooms draping its body like a mutated sash. A wide mushroom
capped its head, but its three fingers were bare of any fungus. The thin
tendrils hung off its hands like whips, and I knew they would be just as
lethal.
glowing, ice blue orbs. The eyes that I knew could see me, and were filled with hate.
It's been a fun story to do, something to pass the time while I wait for the next proofs of Path of the Horseman and Cursed: Demon's Daughter to come in. Next week is going to be busy with Real Life stuff, but I'm hoping to get as much done as I can in the coming days.
As a side note, don't forget that the contest for a FREE paperback copy of Avast, Ye Airships! is still going on! Just leave a comment here telling me about your favorite thing about steampunk. Winners will be chosen at random, but extra points will be given to those who leave a kind word about Path of the Horseman, even if you just say the cover is nice. Contest runs until May 28, but lots of spots are still open!
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Amy
I presume it is a poisonous mushroom!
ReplyDeleteI didn't think about that actually– my first idea was to have it look terrifying and hunt my main character to try so it could pummel him. But I haven't done revisions yet, so poison would be something to consider, thank you!
DeleteHmm, mushrooms exist to slowly devour matter and convert it into...well, more mushroom. And the coolest part about mushrooms is the part we see normally on the ground is usually the smallest part. So... yeah, I'd be pretty nervous here.
ReplyDeleteGlad I'm not the only one! ;)
DeleteVery nice details which ignite the senses! At least that's what it did to me. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteEW! I love mushrooms, but that dude seriously creeps me out. Great description!
ReplyDeleteHaha thank you. I have a hard time looking at Portabello's now.
DeleteCreepy, no question! Nightmare stuff...which means really good. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteFabulous - but slightly creepy - description - could visualize it.
ReplyDeleteGood to hear, thank you!
DeleteNature can be lovely or creepy... this tree-man doesn't seem friendly at all.
ReplyDeleteNope– he's definitely not. >:)
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