That time of the week again! Time to post 8-10 sentences of my writing for Weekend Writing Warriors. Since I'm working on promoting Storm Born, which is still up for pre-order, I'm going to continue with snippets from the beginning of the book. Last week, our heroine Ava was confronted and stabbed by a man she thought was her saviour in the middle of a hurricane brought on by a humanoid creature called a Stormkind. Information overload, I know. This week, I'm skipping ahead to the second chapter, were Ava wakes up and sees the devastation of the massive storm, known as the Centennial...
Nothing remained standing. Nothing. Every single house was
flattened into piles of crushed bricks, shattered stone, and splintered wood.
Windows from apartment buildings and businesses were shattered, leaving dark,
gaping holes in their wake. Palm trees lay across the streets in crumpled
heaps. Flattened beneath them were telephone lines and power poles, their wires
wrapped haphazardly around overturned cars and trucks like pythons squeezing
around their prey. It was like a rain of giant fists had pounded into the
city, hammering without mercy until only shambles remained.
Complete devastation spanned
as far as I could see, all the way to the horizon and the ocean beyond. The
water was calm and placid now, but I saw upturned boats and remnants of the
docks bobbing helplessly in the water.
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A single night can change your life... for the worst.
It’s been a century since the last Centennial Storm, the calamitous phenomenon that covers the world in disasters”" tornadoes, hurricanes, blizzards, tsunamis, and dust storms”" caused not by nature, but by alien creatures from another realm. The Stormkind.
Ava Reid tries not to think about that night, when she was caught in a hurricane and face to face with one of the Stormkind, the man with a dagger, and the agony she felt when he stabbed her with a crystal blade. Yet as she and the rest of Florida’s citizens begin to rebuild their lives, Ava can’t help but notice strange things happening around her. Things she seems to be causing. The gusts of wind and sudden floods that attract the attentions of a mysterious stranger leaving her clues, and the deadlier men following her.
It isn’t long before Ava is swept up into a wild conspiracy, led by a secret society that knows the truth about the Stormkind”" and what their enemies have planned for the world she loves. If she wishes to protect her friends and her family, Ava must harness her strange new abilities and become part of the Stormkind society. Because if she loses control, there will be no force strong enough to stop her...
***It's been a productive week for me, with a feature in an article on Bookworks that makes me sound like I've been doing this for a decade rather than a couple years, an author spotlight on The Bookish Crypt, and new paperbacks coming in for the Damnation's Door giveaways.
All the while, I've been plugging away at the rough draft of Storm of the Gods, the first novel in my upcoming urban Greek mythology series, Areios Brothers. I'm close to the end, about 2.5 more chapters to go, which is fantastic, but the timing puts me in a dilemma... Because tomorrow is my birthday. :D
On one hand, writing brings me pure happiness. I love the story I'm working on, world, characters, and all, and I do want to have it finished and in the polishing phases before the end of the month (still wondering if I need Beta readers to look it over before I send it to publishers?)... but I'm not above being lazy on my birthday. I'm already thinking I'll have a bath, watch The Walking Dead so I can get the heartbreak and frustration over with, and my family's taking me out for pizza, but I don't know if I just want to stay in my PJ's and read all day, or if I'll be suckered into this story and end up writing regardless.
So that's my snippet and some news. Be sure to stop by the other Weekend Writing Warriors blogs and give them some love in the comments. Hope everyone has a great weekend! I know I will. ;)
Amy
Happy Birthday for tomorrow, Amy.
ReplyDeleteAwesome description of the Storm aftermath.
Well done for all the hard work!
Thank you. :D
DeleteWhat a way to celebrate, Amy -- by watching The Walking Dead. Sometimes I worry about us members of the Writing Tribe.
ReplyDeleteNever a dull moment. ;)
DeleteHappy Birthday in advance! Great snippet...love the descriptions, and definitely need to put this one on my to-read list.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! :)
DeleteHappy Birthday, and absolutely gorgeous descriptions in your excerpt this week!
ReplyDeleteHappy Birthday! Loved the vivid description of devastation- it's something you're particularly good at. Descriptions that is, not devastation. :-)
ReplyDeleteHaha, I'm glad the distinction was made. ;) And thank you so much. :)
DeleteHappy birthday - and if you feel like writing, then write, but don't feel you have to. I really liked the descriptions of the devastation, by the way - the python wires and giant fists grabbed me.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I'm sure I'll make up my mind the day of. :) Glad you liked the descriptions! :D
DeleteQuite a scene of destruction you paint for us. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteWell that makes it very clear that the hurricane was super violent! It made me think of clips I saw from areas hit by Sandy. Spooky stuff.
ReplyDeleteI definitely used a fair amount of research before writing and I'm glad that came across. Thank you! :)
DeleteHappy birthday, Amy!
ReplyDeleteWow--excellent job of writing devastation. The giant fist and the python really brought it to life. :-)
Thank you so much Teresa! :D
DeleteHappy birthday! Awesome snippet. I love the image of giant fists pounding into the town.
ReplyDeleteThanks! :)
DeleteHappy birthday! Great snippet, you've done an excellent job capturing the desolation of the scene.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. :)
DeleteThat's not good... Love the imagery, though, as if a rampaging troop of giants destroyed everything.
ReplyDeleteHope you have a wonderful birthday!
Thank you very much!
DeleteHappy Birthday!
ReplyDeleteI liked the "rain of giant fists"
Thank you! That definitely seems to be the popular quote. ;)
DeleteFantastic imagery! Happy BD!--Book Bling Blogger
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! :)
DeleteGreat descriptions. Gotta wonder how many people survived the devastation.
ReplyDeleteThank you, and I'll say this- it wasn't many. :S
DeletePowerful snippet. Very vivid and..well...devastating. How did she survive, I wonder?
ReplyDeleteThank you! :D
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