tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post7492175283840923819..comments2023-12-02T02:39:28.391-08:00Comments on Literary Braun: Sunday SnippetAmy Braunhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-45396441658471493322015-08-03T21:07:21.356-07:002015-08-03T21:07:21.356-07:00Thank you! To be honest I have to work on using sa...Thank you! To be honest I have to work on using said advantage a little more, but I've been a little caught up in another idea that Sawyer and his crew are putting to use that I keep forgetting about the initial idea! This story is going to be a challenge to edit. :SAmy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-76215310852947445992015-08-03T20:21:36.723-07:002015-08-03T20:21:36.723-07:00I loved the tone of the whole snippet and I'm ...I loved the tone of the whole snippet and I'm dying to know what the advantage may be! Excellent excerpt, I'm intrigued.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-14400574477329788002015-08-02T18:19:46.997-07:002015-08-02T18:19:46.997-07:00It's really the only way I can get things done...It's really the only way I can get things done haha. I have a To Do List with when I need to send things out or have them done by. I find it really helps once you get it going!Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-24386290895847177202015-08-02T18:18:54.024-07:002015-08-02T18:18:54.024-07:00Haha they could definitely use a ray of sunshine r...Haha they could definitely use a ray of sunshine right about now. ;)Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-50944807564621543752015-08-02T18:18:27.231-07:002015-08-02T18:18:27.231-07:00Thank you! I haven't really gotten to that par...Thank you! I haven't really gotten to that part yet, but there are a few ideas kicking around that sound like they'll be fun to test out. ;)Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-29543178783366777212015-08-02T18:17:42.258-07:002015-08-02T18:17:42.258-07:00Thanks so much!Thanks so much!Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-4800603553221191932015-08-02T13:07:12.901-07:002015-08-02T13:07:12.901-07:00You've got me wondering what advantage Sawyer ...You've got me wondering what advantage Sawyer refers to. Hope it works.<br /><br />I empathize about getting the snippets up in time. Several of mine were either late or missed entirely before I started writing them and scheduling them to go live when I wanted. I already have a post scheduled for a September blog tour. Scheduling is great!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-64668607676617214252015-08-02T13:05:16.043-07:002015-08-02T13:05:16.043-07:00Oh, come on, a little optimism helps! :)Oh, come on, a little optimism helps! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-58836765980587130772015-08-02T12:37:29.153-07:002015-08-02T12:37:29.153-07:00Exciting! "When" sounds ominous, but I&#...Exciting! "When" sounds ominous, but I'm hoping that ace in the hole they've got saves the day. :)Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-53331099813033068632015-08-02T12:28:50.447-07:002015-08-02T12:28:50.447-07:00Love that last line "When, Sawyer. When they ...Love that last line "When, Sawyer. When they go wrong. You’re luck has never been that good.". It really sets up the hook and tension. Great job.Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-75443373906364135592015-08-02T10:55:54.127-07:002015-08-02T10:55:54.127-07:00You're got great action dialogue. It makes th...You're got great action dialogue. It makes the scene vibrate with energy. Nice job!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-42670513637608888152015-08-02T09:53:28.548-07:002015-08-02T09:53:28.548-07:00Sawyer's always anticipating something to go w...Sawyer's always anticipating something to go wrong. And for good reason, to be honest. He's not the luckiest sky-pirate in this world. ;)Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-12078445659047373312015-08-02T09:20:56.682-07:002015-08-02T09:20:56.682-07:00Not a good sign if he's anticipating bad luck....Not a good sign if he's anticipating bad luck.Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-91547908964294919152015-08-02T08:42:42.807-07:002015-08-02T08:42:42.807-07:00Oh, it will be. The enemy ship is a little absurd,...Oh, it will be. The enemy ship is a little absurd, but I kind of love the idea, which I got from Jennifer Estep's latest novel, SPIDER'S TRAP. :DAmy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-39529570342630796172015-08-02T07:04:25.885-07:002015-08-02T07:04:25.885-07:00I guess it's hard to be optimistic at the begi...I guess it's hard to be optimistic at the beginning of EVERY big battle. Sounds like it will be noisy. :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-12205968709027104852015-08-02T05:53:01.329-07:002015-08-02T05:53:01.329-07:00Thank you! Thank you! Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6351341938179366879.post-84643254160949643872015-08-02T05:25:06.860-07:002015-08-02T05:25:06.860-07:00Nice work: well-paced, exciting, and I love the in...Nice work: well-paced, exciting, and I love the inner dialogue! =DDaezarkian13https://www.blogger.com/profile/08839083029518977312noreply@blogger.com